Nice build up, great choice of shots. Fanatstic choice of music, really helps to wake the audience up and create lots of tension. Speed effects look great and the titles make it seem really professional. Amazing idea loved it!
This storyline is really interesting and original, I was gripped the whole way through. The music creates a very creepy and bizarre mood, which is great, and the editing really gives the whole piece a professional finish. I really enjoyed this one, well done
Based on the audience feedback from Youtube, I agreed to the comment 'some shots get too much screentime' as the pace is slowing down and it has the danger of having the audience to switch off. However, we managed to speed it up through quick cuts and faster music to show his eagerness and nervousness which I think it is effective.
some shots get too much screentime... that dont need to be shown for so long.
I like the title coming up in the end!